From: Wolfgang Bangerth <bangerth@colostate.edu>
Date: Thu, 28 May 2020 20:12:44 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: Take over some of the edits from #50.
X-Git-Url: https://gitweb.dealii.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=2678cf2a7eee607acbd01ae41bc4eba3c976e163;p=release-papers.git

Take over some of the edits from #50.
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diff --git a/9.2/paper.tex b/9.2/paper.tex
index 934398d..77808d4 100644
--- a/9.2/paper.tex
+++ b/9.2/paper.tex
@@ -306,9 +306,10 @@ in the file that lists all changes for this release}, see \cite{changes91}.
 
 Previously, all triangulation classes of \texttt{deal.II} had in common that the coarse grid is replicated by
 all processes in a parallel environment, and the actual mesh used for computations is constructed by repeated
-refinement. However, this has its limitations in industrial
-applications, where frequently the mesh comes
-from an external mesh generator in the form of a file that already contains millions
+refinement. However, this has its limitations in many
+applications where the mesh comes
+from an external mesh generator in the form of a file that frequently
+already contains millions
 or tens of millions of cells. For such configurations, applications might exhaust
 available memory already while reading the mesh on each MPI process.
 
@@ -1187,10 +1188,13 @@ University of California -- Davis.
 W.~Bangerth and T.~Heister were also partially supported by award DMS-1821210.
 \todo[inline]{Need to add FRES project}
 
-D.~Davydov was supported by the German Research Foundation (DFG), grant DA
-1664/2-1 and the Bayerisches Kompetenznetzwerk
-f\"ur Technisch-Wissenschaftliches Hoch- und H\"ochstleistungsrechnen
-(KONWIHR).
+%D.~Davydov was supported by the German Research Foundation (DFG), grant DA
+%1664/2-1 and the Bayerisches Kompetenznetzwerk
+%f\"ur Technisch-Wissenschaftliches Hoch- und H\"ochstleistungsrechnen
+%(KONWIHR).
+
+A.~V.~Grayver was partially supported by the European Space Agency
+Swarm DISC program.
 
 T.~Heister was also partially supported by NSF Award DMS-1522191, and
 by Technical Data Analysis, Inc. through US Navy SBIR N16A-T003.