From: Wolfgang Bangerth <bangerth@colostate.edu>
Date: Wed, 13 May 2020 23:49:06 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: Update a comment.
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@@ -221,10 +221,12 @@ in the file that lists all changes for this release}, see \cite{changes91}.
 \subsection{New and improved tutorial and code gallery programs}
 \label{subsec:steps}
 
-Many of the \dealii{} tutorial programs were substantially revised as
-part of this release. In particular, we have converted many places
-that now allow for simpler code through the use of C++11 features such
-as range-based for loops and lambda functions.
+Many of the \dealii{} tutorial programs were revised in a variety of
+ways as part of this release. A particular example is that we have
+converted a number of programs to use range-based for loops (a C++11
+feature) for loops over a range of integer indices, given that the
+range-based way of writing loops seems to be the idiomatic approach
+these days.
 
 In addition, there are a number of new tutorial programs:
 \begin{itemize}