From: Wolfgang Bangerth <bangerth@colostate.edu>
Date: Sat, 27 May 2023 02:46:23 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: More minor changes.
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More minor changes.
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diff --git a/9.5/paper.tex b/9.5/paper.tex
index 4fa5e17..6bcc134 100644
--- a/9.5/paper.tex
+++ b/9.5/paper.tex
@@ -284,10 +284,15 @@ interface with BOOST.
 
 In the current release, LinearAlgebra::distributed::Vector and the
 CUDAWrappers::MatrixFree framework are using Kokkos. This allows them to work on
-all the architectures supported by Kokkos. The Kokkos backend used \dealii is
-`Kokkos::DefaultExecutionSpace` which is the highest available in the hierarchy
+all the architectures supported by Kokkos. The Kokkos backend used by \dealii is
+\texttt{Kokkos::DefaultExecutionSpace} which is the highest available in the hierarchy
 device, host-parallel, and host-serial.
 
+\todo[inline]{Are you saying that all three of these are used? If so,
+  maybe replace ``backend'' by ``backends''?}
+
+\todo[inline]{Would it be useful to add a paragraph about future plans?}
+
 %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
 \subsubsection{Updates and additions to the PETSc wrappers}\label{sec:petsc}
 
@@ -739,20 +744,19 @@ While there are no new \dealii tutorial programs in this release, many
 were extensively revised.
 \todo[inline]{See if we can say something more concrete.}
 
-There are also two new programs in the code gallery (a collection of
+There are also three new programs in the code gallery (a collection of
 user-contributed programs that often solve more complicated problems
 than tutorial programs, and that are intended as starting points for further
 research rather than as teaching tools):
 \begin{itemize}
-  \item The program \textit{``A posteriori error estimator for first order hyperbolic problems''}
-  was contributed by Marco Feder.
-  \item The program \textit{``Distributed moving laser heating''} was contributed by
-  Hongfeng Ma and Tatiana E.~Itina.
+  \item \textit{``A posteriori error estimator for first order hyperbolic problems''},
+  contributed by Marco Feder;
+  \item \textit{``Distributed moving laser heating''}, contributed by
+  Hongfeng Ma and Tatiana E.~Itina;
+  \item \textit{``Generalized Swift-Hohenberg Equation Solver''}, contributed by
+  Sam Scheuerman.
 \end{itemize}
 
-\todo[inline]{There may be another one by Sam Scheuerman. Let's see
-  whether it still arrives in time.}
-
 
 %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
 \subsection{Incompatible changes}\label{subsec:deprecated}