From: Wolfgang Bangerth <bangerth@colostate.edu>
Date: Mon, 5 Jun 2023 00:32:17 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: Minor edits.
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Minor edits.
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diff --git a/9.5/paper.tex b/9.5/paper.tex
index 759b1e0..645bc10 100644
--- a/9.5/paper.tex
+++ b/9.5/paper.tex
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ code that can efficiently run on diverse architectures. Kokkos provides
 abstractions for both parallel execution of code and data management. It
 supports a wide range of backend programming models, including CUDA, HIP, SYCL,
 HPX, OpenMP, and C++ threads, and continues to evolve with the development of
-new backend options.
+new hardware and corresponding backend options.
 
 \dealii{} has, for several releases already, used CUDA to offload some
 operations onto GPUs. It has also had interfaces to CUDA-based linear
@@ -771,13 +771,15 @@ applications. That said, the following are worth mentioning since they
 may have been more widely used:
 \begin{itemize}
   \item
-  The class \texttt{hp::DoFHandler} has been removed. The standard \texttt{DoFHandler} now implements all hp-related functionality.
+  The class \texttt{hp::DoFHandler} has been removed. The
+  \texttt{DoFHandler} class now implements all $hp$-related
+  functionality, as it has for the past few releases.
 
   \item
   We improved the type safety for active and future FE indices in the \texttt{DoFHandler} implementation by introducing a new data type \texttt{types::fe\textunderscore{}index}. Corresponding functions like \texttt{DoFCellAccessor::active\textunderscore{}fe\textunderscore{}index()} and \texttt{DoFHandler::get\textunderscore{}active\textunderscore{}fe\textunderscore{}indices()} have changed their interface.
 
   \item
-  This rework also affects the serialization process of active FE indices. You will need to recreate your serialized data \textit{if and only if} you work in hp-mode. You can continue to use previously generated data if you do not use hp-mode. A special case forms \texttt{parallel::distributed::Triangulation} for non-hp data, in which it is sufficient to increase the version in the metadata file by one from ``4'' to ``5''.
+  This rework also affects the serialization process of active FE indices. You will need to recreate your serialized data \textit{if and only if} you work in $hp$-mode. You can continue to use previously generated data if you do not use $hp$-mode. A special case forms \texttt{parallel::distributed::Triangulation} for non-$hp$ data, in which it is sufficient to increase the version in the metadata file by one from ``4'' to ``5''.
 
   \item
   ...