From: Wolfgang Bangerth <bangerth@colostate.edu>
Date: Thu, 26 May 2022 17:16:48 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: Minor updates to a few changelog entries.
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Minor updates to a few changelog entries.
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diff --git a/doc/news/changes/minor/20210819Bangerthc b/doc/news/changes/minor/20210819Bangerthc
index 53864f1990..8627515b47 100644
--- a/doc/news/changes/minor/20210819Bangerthc
+++ b/doc/news/changes/minor/20210819Bangerthc
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 New: There is now an overload for
-Particles::ParticleAccessor::set_properties() that a Tensor
+Particles::ParticleAccessor::set_properties() that takes a Tensor
 as argument. It is used in step-19.
 <br>
 (Wolfgang Bangerth, 2021/08/19)
diff --git a/doc/news/changes/minor/20211115Bangerth-c b/doc/news/changes/minor/20211115Bangerth-c
index f34e57c805..47ff338c7e 100644
--- a/doc/news/changes/minor/20211115Bangerth-c
+++ b/doc/news/changes/minor/20211115Bangerth-c
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-New: In the same spirit as provided by the C++20 [range
-adaptors](https://en.cppreference.com/w/cpp/ranges) feature, it is now
+New: In the same spirit as provided by the C++20
+[range adaptors](https://en.cppreference.com/w/cpp/ranges) feature, it is now
 possible to "filter" ranges over the active cells of Triangulation
 and DoFHandler objects.
 <br>
@@ -20,8 +20,6 @@ by:
 @code
   DoFHandler<dim> dof_handler;
   ...
-  const auto filtered_iterators_range =
-    filter_iterators();
   for (const auto &cell :
           dof_handler.active_cell_iterators() | IteratorFilters::LocallyOwnedCell())
     {
diff --git a/doc/news/changes/minor/20220421KronbichlerMunchRoschlaubSashko b/doc/news/changes/minor/20220421KronbichlerMunchRoschlaubSashko
index 9fc0b8b57d..e3f4959a9d 100644
--- a/doc/news/changes/minor/20220421KronbichlerMunchRoschlaubSashko
+++ b/doc/news/changes/minor/20220421KronbichlerMunchRoschlaubSashko
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 New: There is a new function DoFRenumbering::matrix_free_data_locality() that
-re-orders the unknowns of the unknowns in a DoFHandler to give optimal data
+re-orders the indices of the unknowns in a DoFHandler to give optimal data
 locality of pre- and post-operations in matrix-free loops.
 <br>
 (Martin Kronbichler, Peter Munch, Alexander Roschlaub, Dmytro Sashko, 2022/04/21)
diff --git a/doc/news/changes/minor/20220426DanielSun b/doc/news/changes/minor/20220426DanielSun
index 344ecae05c..61a2db8d58 100644
--- a/doc/news/changes/minor/20220426DanielSun
+++ b/doc/news/changes/minor/20220426DanielSun
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Fixed: The building process now works well with MPI option on Windows system.
-If configured properly, we can explore the capability of distributed computing
-on Windows system within Deal.II framework.
+Fixed: The build process now works well with MPI option on Windows systems.
+If configured properly, this allows exploring the capability of distributed computing
+on Windows system with deal.II.
 <br>
 (Daniel Sun, 2022/04/26)